I’m guest-arting the back cover of issue #5 of Outnumbered [link], a local comic about super-powered teenage punks versus drug-dealing wererats. Today I went to the semi-regular Vancouver Comicon and hung out at the Critical Hit Comics table trying to finish the pencil art. I got it mostly done, and now present for critique. At the top you can see I’ve erased the helmet that one of the wererats is pulling off the head of the character Ruckus, I’ll come back to that later. Other than that, is there anything that sticks out at you as requiring a fix?
That right arm looks like it’s just tangled, when you expect it to be grabbing something, or clocking the other wererat.
That’s the only thing I thought of and it’s minor.