Ogres and Such

Which page do you like better? VOTE NOW! IN THE COMMENTS!

Page 3:

or Page 1:

About Toren

Illustrator, comic artist, voice and screen actor, lead singer for The Darkest of the Hillside Thickets, co-author Spaceship Zero roleplaying game.
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6 Responses to Ogres and Such

  1. BarqMulch says:

    Definitely page 3…hooray for legs being ripped off!

  2. jasonladell says:

    Page 3 for sure but I love the first panel from Page 1

  3. MBeck says:

    Not sure what the heck is going on in any of them, but page 3 has solid action feel and style that jumps out.

  4. z-depth-charge says:

    Both are good, but the first panel if page three feels dead compared to the rest of the page. Also, it feels disjointed, but that could change had we dialog to fill it out. If it’s “silent”, then the story progression is not clear.

  5. dreadpixie says:

    I like page 3. I had to think too hard to see what you were showing in page 1. And thinking is for suckers.

  6. Sonofapreacherman says:

    I think that your artwork looks awesome. I think that your comic style improves with every page. I think that the unseen words will clarify everything that isn’t visually apparent (but then again, you don’t get more biased than me on that last point).

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